03/18/2022
Beginnings can be hard.
Witness this years' rocky ride toward Spring.
Snow, followed by double-digit temperatures, chased by punishing winds, freezing drizzle that morphs into a single sunny day, then a bout of zero visibility fog.
Beginning a story can be equally challenging.
Diane Schoemperlen, editor of Best Canadian Stories 2021, has this to say:
"I wanted stories to which I felt an immediate connection in the first few sentences. In a short story there is no room for warming up the way there can be in a novel...every word matters."
And Schoemperlen admitted to wanting stories "in which there was some feeling of mystery or menace, a sense of tension and things being set in relentless motion."
Here are a few simple tips for writing a beginning that will capture a reader's attention:
* Make something happen that will force your protagonist to react
* This something should have consequences for your character; they can't ignore it
* Set the scene- let your readers know where they are
*Keep the story moving forward
Here's a "Beginning" I wrote this morning:
It was the blast of Ozzy Osbourne on the car radio singing, "Generals gathered in their masses...," from that 70's anthem, that saved the dog and I. In the dense fog, we heard the silver sedan just in time to jump back before it climbed the curb and stopped a few feet away.
A woman, barefooted and underdressed for March in Toronto, stumbled from the drivers side and collapsed on the sidewalk.
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For more inspiration, I recommend the stories Diane Schoemperlen chose for Best Canadian Stories 2021.
Fifteen great beginnings.