26/10/2026
Could this exact message have gone to 20 other bankers?
If yes, it isn’t ready. One line has to be something only you could write to only this person.
Where that line comes from:
1. A deal, plus your own thought
“I read about the X acquisition and I’m still working out why they bought instead of built.” End it as a question.
2. A shared path
They made the jump from your background into investment banking. That’s the jump you’re trying to make. Say so.
3. A shared origin
Same university, same canton, same country, same hobby. Alumni reply to alumni.
4. A mutual contact
Turns a cold message into a warm one. Ask that person for a short intro before you go direct.
Then the close: one small, clear ask. “Would you be open to a 15-minute call next week?”
Two things that kill replies:
Flattery. “I would love to learn from your experience” is in every message they get.
Copy-pasting to one team. Bankers at the same bank talk, and identical messages land on the same desk.
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